What is crafting clauses? Last week, we unravelled the magic behind phrases. This week, let’s delve into another crucial aspect of crafting sizzling sentences—clauses.
A clause is a group of words that form part of a sentence. Unlike a phrase, it contains a subject and a predicate.
Why are Clauses Important?
Clauses are the foundation of sentences, and knowing their importance is essential for clear writing. Here’s why clauses matter:
Clauses provide the structural foundation for sentences. A standalone independent clause can be a complete sentence. When you combine dependent clauses with independent ones, things get more complex and interesting.
Independent clauses are all about complete thoughts. They make their ideas clear and to the point, so you know exactly what they’re trying to say.
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Understanding types of clauses brings more variety to your sentences. This variation jazzes up your writing and makes it more interesting. It’s better to mix up sentence structures for readers instead of being repetitive.
Context and Detail
Adding clauses helps to give sentences more context and detail. You can go into more detail, clarify, or add context to ideas, making the text more informative and nuanced.
Relationships Between Ideas
Clauses are super important for showing how ideas connect. Clauses are useful for connecting and organizing thoughts. They can show time or place, give more info with adjective clauses, or act as subjects or objects with noun clauses.
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Complexity and Sophistication
Using clauses skillfully makes writing more complex and sophisticated. You can manipulate clauses to make really complex sentences that impress readers with their language skills.
Clauses help make things clear so there’s no confusion. They let you express subtle meanings and avoid confusion, so readers get the message.
Conveying Relationships in Ideas
Dependent clauses show the relationships between ideas. Whether it’s showing cause and effect, contrast, or condition, they help you express more nuanced connections between different parts of their text.
In short, knowing how to use clauses helps you make sentences that are correct and stylish. They’re the tools used to create a beautiful string of words, expressing thoughts with precision and style.
Clauses are usually either independent or dependent:
These are sentences that can standalone – are the solo acts of the sentence world. They’ve got a subject, a verb, and they make sense.
♦ She enjoys reading.
Unlike independent clauses, dependent clauses cannot standalone as complete sentences. They rely on independent clauses to form a complete thought.
♦ Because she enjoys reading
This sentence leaves us hanging, craving more information.
Types of Clauses
Clauses come in different types, each doing something different in a sentence. Take a look at the main types:
These clauses work like adjectives, giving more information about a noun. They usually begin with words like:
♦ The book that she recommended is excellent.
Acting as adverbs, these clauses modify verbs and provide additional information about:
♦ She reads whenever she has free time.
These clauses serve as nouns within a sentence. They can function as:
♦ What she said surprised everyone.
Each kind of clause makes your writing more complex and interesting. Mixing and matching these types allows you to create sentences that are not only grammatically correct but also varied and engaging. Trying out different clauses can improve your ability to express ideas.
Clauses with Complex Sentences
How do clauses work in complex sentences?
A clause is a group of words in a sentence with its own subject and action. Look at these examples:
♦ The lightning flashed, and the thunder roared.
♦ The train started when the bell rang.
In both sentences, there are two parts, or clauses. But they work differently.
In the first example, each part can be its own sentence. They’re like two independent statements, joined by and. The connection between them isn’t clear in how it’s said, but the speaker probably thinks there’s a connection in their mind.
In the second example, the connection between the parts is clear. One part (the train started) is the main idea, and the other part (when the bell rang) adds details about when it happened. This second part can’t stand alone as a full sentence; it depends on the first part. So, this kind of sentence is called complex.
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Remember, an average compound sentence is when you link two or more simple sentences. Each of these simple sentences becomes a separate part of the sentence.
Now, we can also join two or more complex sentences in the same way to create one compound sentence.
♦ The train started when the bell rang, and Tom watched until the last car disappeared.
This sentence is clearly compound because it has two parts (clauses) joined by “and.” Each of these parts is complex on its own, meaning it could be a sentence by itself.
You can also mix things up. You could join a complex sentence with a simple one to make a compound sentence. For instance:
♦ The train started when the bell rang, and Tom gazed after it in despair.
When a sentence has this kind of mix – compound in structure but with one or more parts being complex – it’s called a compound-complex sentence.
Coordinate clauses are parts of a sentence that have equal importance or rank. In simpler terms, they’re independent clauses that can standalone but are joined in a compound sentence. These clauses are coordinated because they’re equally important.
♦ Independent clause 1: The sun was setting.
♦ Independent clause 2: The stars began to appear.
If we join these two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction like “and,” we get a compound sentence with coordinate clauses:
♦ Compound sentence: The sun was setting, and the stars began to appear.
In this example, both clauses have equal weight, and the coordinating conjunction and connects them to express a related idea.
Coordinating conjunctions like
are commonly used to connect coordinate clauses.
Sentences may be simple, compound, or complex.
A simple sentence has but one subject and one predicate, either or both of which may be compound.
♦ Iron rusts.
♦ Charles III is king.
♦ Dogs, foxes, and rabbits have four legs.
♦ The defendant rose and addressed the court.
♦ Tamar and his men crossed the bridge and scaled the wall.
A compound sentence has two or more independent clauses, conjunctions can join them or not.
♦ Shakespeare was born in 1564; he died in 1616.
♦ A rifle cracked, and the wolf fell.
♦ You must hurry, or we will miss the bus.
♦ James Watt did not invent the steam engine, but he greatly improved it.
♦ Either you have forgotten to email or your response has failed to reach me.
A complex sentence has two or more clauses, one of which is independent and the rest subordinate.
♦ Those who knew him best affirmed that this Mr. Toil was a very worthy character, and that he had done more good, both to children and grown people, than anybody else in the world. (Nathaniel Hawthorne).
♦ Portia, when she returned, was in that happy temper of mind which never fails to attend the consciousness of having performed a good action; her cheerful spirits enjoyed everything she saw: the moon never seemed to shine so brightly before; and when that pleasant moon was hid behind a cloud, then a light which she saw from her house at Belmont as well pleased her charmed fancy. (Charles Lamb).
♦ Once upon a time, there lived a very rich man, and a king besides, whose name was Midas; and he had a little daughter, whom nobody but himself ever heard of, and whose name I either never knew, or have entirely forgotten. So, because I love odd names for little girls, I choose to call her Marygold. (Nathaniel Hawthorne).
♦ I rose and prepared to leave the Abbey. As I descended the flight of steps which lead into the body of the building, my eye was caught by the shrine of Edward the Confessor, and I ascended the small staircase that conducts to it, to take from thence a general survey of this wilderness of tombs. (John Irving).
Examples of Creative Clause Usage
Let’s explore some creative uses of clauses by popular authors:
Neil Gaiman uses an adverbial clause to infuse a touch of whimsy and evoke a vivid sensory experience.
♦ The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.
Interpreter of Maladies
Jhumpa Lahiri uses lots of describing words to make you think and feel, bringing the reader closer to the narrator.
♦ Still, there are times I am bewildered by each mile I have traveled, each meal I have eaten, each person I have known, each room in which I have slept.
Never Let Me Go
Kazuo Ishiguro employs a metaphorical adverbial clause to convey a poignant reflection, adding depth to the emotional impact of the scene.
♦ I keep thinking about this river somewhere, with the water moving really fast. And these two people in the water, trying to hold onto each other, holding on as hard as they can, but in the end it’s just too much.
Half of a Yellow Sun
Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie employs a complex sentence structure with an adjectival clause to explore the theme of forgiveness and its nuances, creating a thought-provoking statement.
♦ There are some things that are so unforgivable that they make other things easily forgivable.
The God of Small Things
Arundhati Roy uses an adjectival clause to capture a moment of profound societal change, infusing the sentence with a sense of paradox and irony.
♦ It was a time when the unthinkable became the thinkable and the impossible really happened.
10 Crafting Clause Tips
1. Balance Simple and Complex Sentences: Mix simple and complex sentences to maintain a good flow and engage your readers.
2. Use Independent Clauses for Emphasis: Place important ideas in independent clauses to give them emphasis and highlight their significance.
3. Employ Subordinate Clauses for Detail: Use subordinate clauses to provide additional details, enhancing the richness of your writing.
4. Express Relationships Clearly: Ensure that the relationship between clauses is clear, especially in complex sentences.
5. Use Adjective Clauses for Description: Employ adjective clauses to provide vivid descriptions and add specificity to your writing.
6. Be Mindful of Parallel Structure: Maintain parallel structure when using coordinate clauses to enhance readability.
7. Avoid Dangling Modifiers: Be cautious of misplaced or dangling modifiers when using clauses to maintain clarity.
8. Consider Sentence Rhythm: Pay attention to the rhythm of your sentences by varying the lengths and structures of your clauses.
9. Vary Sentence Structure: Experiment with different clauses to avoid monotony and create a dynamic narrative.
10. Proofread for Clarity: Review your writing to ensure that the relationships between clauses are clear as well as your intended meaning.
Last Words on Crafting Clauses
In short, clauses are like instruments that create harmony in language. Once you master them, anything is possible. So, go forth, experiment, and craft sentences that dance off the page!
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